Haiku Poetry

During our presentation, we ask the audience to compose (in pairs) a haiku poem based on some photographs and some factual, text-based information on oceans. This activity is preceded by a preassessment. Participants answer a few questions about themselves and then score themselves based on that assessment. A visual learner and linguistic/verbal learner are paired together. The visual learners study the photographs of oceans while the verbal learners read some facts about oceans. Then the pairs of students compose the haiku together.

Here is what some members of our audience came up with:


brilliant sun dancing
twinkling upon the waves
powerfully strong


- James Yap

Waves crashing on rocks,
Man continual motion,
Life teaming below.

-Anonymous

An expansive dream
Waves breaking over high peaks
Sustaining our souls

-Laura Whitacre
Alex McCombie

Mother of all life
Large, foam, swooshing, pounding surf
Teaming with questions.

-Cheri Capron and Charlene Ludwikowski

I dreamed the ocean
Peaks like DQ ice cream cones.
Salty, fierce waves crash.

-Lesa Willert and Jackie Carll, West Leyden School, Adirondack Central Schools

Earth's daughter water
Bends against brother wind
Loving Father tide!

-Anonymous

Strong and impressive
Energy in motion that
Builds a wall of blue.

-Elizabeth Sacco and Francoise Piron

Water vast gleaming
Imposing power endless
Breaking moving earth.

-Mr. Stacy Kuhn, NY Mills Central School

Calming blue waters
the highest peaks and valleys
still a mystery

-Jennifer French, Patti Fisher, Stephanie Allen, SLL Model Schools

Wind-driven motion
Oaves crash endlessly on shore
Perpetual change

-Candy Crayton and Kate Cronn, Oneida City Schools

Oceans deep and and wide
Bastions of strength o'er the world
Why so far from me?

-Holly White

Waves crashing on rocks
Animals dwelling deep
Forever rolling

-Tina Heckman (General Brown CSD), Scott Exford (Lowville Academy), and Cheryl Kopyt (Model Schools)

Find hidden treasures
Teaming life, constant motion
Tall peaks, deep valleys

-Anonymous

Tides come in, waves crash.
Horizon in the distance
Sand and sea refresh.

-Jane Aronowsky and Holly McCoy, Stockbridge Valley Central School

Powerful blue foam
Meets diversifying dark cliffs
Beautiful danger

-Erin Dineen and Chris Carbone, Clinton Central School

Salty waves crashing
Windy surface strength foam
Blue necessity

- Judy Warner and Cheri Panko, Chenango Forks High School

A mask of wonder
Rich with life power and strength
Imagination

- Dawn Essig (Spackenkill UFSD) and Catherine Parsons (Dutchess BOCES

Ocean - blue power
Continual churning waves
Deep, beautiful life.

- Wendy Birchberg (SCT BOCES) and Paul Rich (Chester UFSD)

Great waves that dwarf me
Blue and deep, it's so alive
Salty like my tears.

- Anonymous

Tall peaks, deep valleys
Strength, motion, blown by the wind
Life under the sea.

- Carol Lee (Ossining School District) and Marie Kish (Byram Hills School District)

Strong, wavy, water
High and low, salty peaks blow
Deep dark blue motion.

- Anonymous

 

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